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6th June 2011
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Veteran
Join Date: Jun 2011
Single Gay Man
in Istanbul (Turkey)
Age: 24 (Starsign: Capricorn)
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I stand
I stand alone, in dark and scared
My heart is all hollow What was there now a knot in my throat Waiting for me to swallow My first english poem attempt. I dont know if this can even be called as poem.  I hope it makes sense to you as it makes to mee.
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6th June 2011
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it definately ryhmes :D
I stand alone in dark and scared My heart is all Hollow What was there is now a knot in my throat waiting for me to swollow. How i feel deep inside wants to become excited and alive. The taste of spunk from a monk reminds me of times i shagged in a bunk... Now you do the next verse :-) |
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6th June 2011
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Veteran
Join Date: Jun 2011
Single Gay Man
in Istanbul (Turkey)
Age: 24 (Starsign: Capricorn)
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More i look less i see
I know for me there is a there Soon i will be blind to me i wish i knew i am going where  u are fast. (with ''there is a there'' i meant there is a place)
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6th June 2011
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Godlike
Join Date: Nov 2010
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in South Carolina (USA)
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I liked it
 Reminds me of my old self heheh still it is a poem As long as you call it that thats what matters.
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7th June 2011
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Crazy Poster
Join Date: Jan 2011
Single Bi Man
in Manchester (UK - England)
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not bad at all - keep writing
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8th June 2011
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Join Date: Dec 2010
Single Bi Man
in Rex (USA)
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i like both of them and yes they definately both rhyme
keep going ooh and btw i loveeee the first one a lot than the second one |
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8th June 2011
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Veteran
Join Date: Jun 2011
Single Gay Man
in Istanbul (Turkey)
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Thank you guys. I jsut typied it down because i saw we got a poems section. I got much better stuff in turkish but they lose their thing in translation.
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8th June 2011
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Veteran
Join Date: Jun 2011
Single Gay Man
in Istanbul (Turkey)
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they say i will go to hell
they talk so sure of my fate god made this soul in me dwell is it possible for him to hate |
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9th June 2011
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King of the Word???
Join Date: Jan 2008
Gay Man in a Monogamous Gay Relationship
in Near Geneva (Switzerland) (France)
Age: 53 (Starsign: Cancer)
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Could you put one up in Turkish, Cain, so we can see what it looks like... ?
You might also venture a translation even if it's not great... |
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9th June 2011
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