David's Poetry

I'm on a sudden poetry roll, so all my poems from now on will be put in here instead of them being all over the place =]

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Thank you for sharing it...

It hits you like the oh-so nearly real light at the end of the tunnel, that love is the final obstacle...

...That love is slowly slipping away from your fingers,
That love is the last thing you see before you die,
That love is the final resting place of your still heart...

...That love, simply is.

COOL

Thanks for your posts.......you have a real skill with words.

Fantastic. Love the past two new ones. Keep up the great work. We are honored to have such a wordssmith

Oh...

With every fibre of my existence I love (hate) you,
It goes with every sweep-me-off-my-feet word,
The epicentre of my love (hate) remains behind your chest...

Oh, oh...

Love (hate) is a many splendoured thing to me now,
Cross my broken heart and not sit around and wait to die,
It'll all be over soon and love (hate) shall conquer all....

Oh, oh, oh...

I am blown away by this absence of returned love (hate),
I cannot breathe but hear your name anti-climaxing on my tongue:
HE DOESN'T LOVE (HATE) YOU LIKE I LOVE (HATE) YOU.

It's okay, little child, come, let the uncontrollable sobbing carry you away...

Forgive me, there are no greater words I can say for your hunger's content,
For if you are still reading this, then I have failed to lose enough blood...

I apologise that my speech is somewhat frank, it's a matter of love and hate,
Watch this space for the latest on the contests of my head and my heart...

I will say this, this I will say, oh, get to the point, will you, we're rather busy,
Well, to your critique's siege I will say these words according to my love;

"We're just... floating, maybe even lost, but, somehow, I'm colder than you."

Dust feeds the air and disappears into the light shining through the glass,
This is the corner where I go to cry and think about things that are broken,
You're so cold that my tears have encrusted as ice upon my broken smile.

Sometimes when the darkness descends I am still there, but you are not,
I remember the love in my head only, because that's where it happened,
And the shadows are so beautiful when you're looking through a black hole.

The radiator has long since died with many things that I have broken,
The cold is unbearable, especially when your memory gives such wonderful head,
But you're not touching my skin anymore, no, no, no, not anymore...

Oh, look, isn't that wedding dress just beautiful?

Remember me? Remember us? There's a certain satisfaction...?
All the times when we shared our suicide attempts, and prayers...
Oh, but look at you now, you're all grown up, you're in love.

I don't actually have a friend that I can tell anything, except you,
Oh God, look at all these tears on the keyboard, can you see them?
Everyone's something different and I am still as wretched as stillborn.

We are both fighting the same losing battle, except, you're sort of won,
No more cages of pathological sinning for you, God loves you so much,
But you're drifting, I'm crying, I'm crying, I'm sorry, oh God, I'm so sorry...

From my perspective everyone turns in their broken mirror surfaces,
But from the outside it's me and my never-ending pathological lie...

From my side of things it seems that I am the perfect imperfection,
But you all see how I am not actually the victim in this situation...

From where I am, there is no judgement, except in a higher power's favour,
But they all know that in my eyes, I am only a judgement myself...

"Put it down! Put your hands behind your head... Back slowly away from the broken heart."

Don't make me disppear into my notebooks again,
You finally have deluded both him and me into love,
Or at least me, who's to say what's right or real...

What do you mean, forever? By that you mean... ?

I have forgotten where I am and where I came from,
This is a cage, and I'm watching it falling, falling down,
On top of me, you're no longer on top of me, no...

What do you mean, forever? By that you mean... ?

This is a questionable lie indeed, a dream within a dream,
This is when you move in for the kill and profuse deceit,
Into the web of past-loves, here's your standing ovation...

What do you mean, forever? By that you mean... ?

"I can explain! Really, it's not what it looks like... I did try to warn him, to save him."

TO REMIND EVERYONE OF THE GENIUS OF OUR BDAY BOY

for style I totally love Unrequited Hatred

and how did you get into my diary for Broken Radiator ???

Hope you had a great birthday and maybe give us a happy piece of your mind

[yar]

I am amazed at your super ability to express you inner feelings so beautifully. Pleas never quit you are very talented.

thank you!! ^O^ dont worry ill post more soon, havent been online in yonks o_O