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Old 1st June 2010   #1
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For some years, I´ve already been writing erotic love stories for my own. Partly biografical, partly fictive. One of them I post to this forum today. I´m always open to comments, compliments and constructive criticism. Enjoy reading!

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Once Softer, Once Harder

"Mornin´, honey!"

Still deep somewhere in dream, I felt a tender kiss on my cheek. Was it real? I squinted at my golden watch: half past five in the morning. Monday morning. The weekend on my motorbike was over, a weekday began, and then...

I had a sigh with a bit of regret, a good stretch, then I turned towards my beloved fiancé Bastian on my right side. Our eyes met each other. We were on the same wavelength of what would come next.

Swift as a fox, I stripped off my pyjamas while Bastian got out of his underpants. See, we are used to sleeping differently dressed. However, he wrapped his hefty arms around my neck, and so did I. His hairless chest rubbed against mine which is rather furry though. Arm in arm, we were lying there. Now I had a deep look into his twinkling brown eyes, next I opened my mouth, and my tongue touched his. We kept kissing for a while in passion during which I rose to seventh heaven till, with a last kiss, he straightened up. I kept my eyes closed curiously waiting for what he might do with me.

He grabbed my legs and lay them onto his shoulders. My back bent. But my butt was fully exposed. From this position, Bastian´s bald body moved forwards, came into me. I groaned out as he penetrated me now, his thick penis penetrating my open hole. He pushed forward, he pulled backward. I was simply enjoying cos it felt that gorgeous. Quite a strength, such a lust. It finally culminated in the moment he withdrew his member, knealt right over me and came. The hot seed shot into my mouth. I tasted the salty aroma of cum and swallowed.

"Delicious breakfast," I said ready to cope with another week full of hard work.

(c) Gaywolf
 
Old 2nd June 2010   #2
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That was a sexy read... bravo. Short and effective, like a quickie?
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Hehehe... hot!

 
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Nice story(even though i probably shouldnt be poking my nose around this part of the forum) it is quite short but still really great. as for the detail not so much.... my overall rating is actually 7/10 the bad part of this story was actually the beginning i would like to know more about clothes from the previous night but thats just me and you cant satisfy everyone
 
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Nice story(even though i probably shouldnt be poking my nose around this part of the forum) it is quite short but still really great. as for the detail not so much.... my overall rating is actually 7/10 the bad part of this story was actually the beginning i would like to know more about clothes from the previous night but thats just me and you cant satisfy everyone
Hi, I see where you´re gettin at but I´m not into such things.

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