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A poem about everlasting confusion
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Oh sleepless night, oh why can't I seem to close my brain for the day.
There isn't even a spark of light, yet my mind is not able to fade away.

I can not help to wonder where to go, when the road seem so blurry.
It all feels like it was not long ago, but now it seems I've got to hurry.

It appears that I am running out of time, but I still can't see anything clearly.
Why can't I find the road that is mine? I am going through the same stuff yearly.

What if I missed the crossroad, or took the wrong turn?
A faint voice echoed, how would I ever be able to learn?

Dark thoughts fills my soul as always, I cannot get over these hurdles.
It feels like I am going through everlasting hallways, without any lit candles.


Note this is my first published poem, be gentle although I appreciate criticism :redface:
Sometimes you need a bit of chaos in your life to be able to shrug off pitiful disdain about something meaningless.
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#2
Absolutely brilliant .Confusedmile:

Thank you for the share , and please keep writing.
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#3
I liked it Xyxthumbs
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