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Seeing Her With You/I Think You Do
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Wrote this in bed a while back, it's the best time to be creative. Kind of like meditation, just laying there in that space between awake and asleep, mind trailing off, ah just lovely.

It's about a boy who's perfect, makes me smile when I'm down, I wrote about him in the relationships forum. Deep down I think we both know the situation.

Seeing Her With You/I Think You Do
You don't know how much I care
Want you with me every where

'Cause seeing her with you
Is making me feel blue
You don't know how much I need you
Maybe you do

Every minute I'm without you
Is a minute too long
We both know it but what can I do
Stick the feelings back where they came from

'Cause seeing her with you
Is making me feel blue
You don't know how much I need you
Maybe you do

In the day I'm thinking of you
Your smile fills my mind
At night I dream of being with you
Why is our love so unkind?

'Cause seeing her with you
Is making me feel blue
You don't know how much I need you
Maybe you do

Maybe you do, Maybe you do

I think you do, I think you do

I think you do

I know you do

That's it. Not anything special but it sums things up quite well, and it's from the heart which is the important thing.
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#2
This is lovely.
I'm a big fan of poetry - especially personal poetry, written for someone special.

And that state between sleep and awake, I know well, and have often come up with lines, titles or verses for my poetry.

Well done to you.

Dan x
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