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An Original a Song I Wrote/Recorded
#1
Hey guys,

I'm dying to share this song I wrote and recorded so here I go. Biggrina

I posted a topic on this forum called "Accidentally In Love" and it basically gives you the back story to this song.

This is a song I wrote and recorded on garage band called "Someone Else"

I hope y'all like it!

http://soundcloud.com/trevordeverteuil/s...ginal-song

Cheers. Smile

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Lyrics

Verse 1

Dare I even try to start
Looking for where you hid my heart
I could search your kitchen counter tops
Or maybe it's under key and lock?

Just when I thought I couldn't love
That my heart could never beat enough
You squeezed your smile right through the gaps
Of all the walls that I once had

Chorus

Playing a song to ease the ache
I pray my heartstrings don't break
For you, I wrote this song but I can tell
It just reminds you of someone else

Verse 2

Oh you've got the sweetest eyes
Like mint chocolate and I can't hide
My goofy grin, I get so shy
Thinking of ways to make you mine

When you're blue I'd be your palette
And we can colour you the way you like it
Under the blankets we'd be cozy and warm
But I just can't ever let you know

Chorus

Playing a song to ease the ache
I pray my heartstrings don't break
For you, I wrote this song but I can tell
It just reminds you of someone else

I'm breathing but my lungs they start to fail
Don't you know you're all I inhale
For you, I wrote this song but I can tell
It just reminds you of someone else

Bridge

And I just can't let you in
Loving you is such a painful secret

Chorus

Playing a song to ease the ache
I pray my heartstrings don't break
For you, I wrote this song but I can tell
It just reminds you of someone else

I'm breathing but my lungs they start to fail
Don't you know you're all I inhale
For you, I wrote this song but I can tell
It just reminds you of someone else

Tag

A song for you
A song for you
A song for you
But might as well name it "Someone Else"

© Trevor de Verteuil
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#2
I like it, you have a good voice and emote well in that song.
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#3
I love it Smile
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#4
Excellent! Thumbgrin
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#5
Loved it too! Well done Yelclap
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#6
Thanks guys! Smile
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#7
Reminds me much of Jason Mraz!
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#8
Very nice, indeed.
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#9
So you're in love with this guy but he's in love with someone else, is that it?
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#10
princealbertofb Wrote:So you're in love with this guy but he's in love with someone else, is that it?

Yep basically haha.
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