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I stand
#1
I stand alone, in dark and scared
My heart is all hollow
What was there now a knot in my throat
Waiting for me to swallow


My first english poem attempt. I dont know if this can even be called as poem. :biggrin: I hope it makes sense to you as it makes to mee.
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#2
it definately ryhmes Big Grin

I stand alone in dark and scared My heart is all Hollow What was there is now a knot in my throat waiting for me to swollow.

How i feel deep inside wants to become excited and alive. The taste of spunk from a monk reminds me of times i shagged in a bunk...

Now you do the next verse :-)
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#3
More i look less i see
I know for me there is a there
Soon i will be blind to me
i wish i knew i am going where

Astrosmiley2 u are fast. (with ''there is a there'' i meant there is a place)Icon16
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#4
I liked it Smile Reminds me of my old self heheh still it is a poem Smile As long as you call it that thats what matters.
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#5
not bad at all - keep writing Confusedmile:
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#6
i like both of them and yes they definately both rhymeConfusedmile:

keep going

ooh and btw i loveeee the first one a lot than the second one
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#7
Thank you guys. I jsut typied it down because i saw we got a poems section. I got much better stuff in turkish but they lose their thing in translation. :tongue:
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#8
they say i will go to hell
they talk so sure of my fate
god made this soul in me dwell
is it possible for him to hate
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#9
Could you put one up in Turkish, Cain, so we can see what it looks like... ?
You might also venture a translation even if it's not great...
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#10
princealbertofb Wrote:Could you put one up in Turkish, Cain, so we can see what it looks like... ?
You might also venture a translation even if it's not great...

You didnt like my english attempts? :biggrin:
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