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Broken Down
#1
I was depressed when I wrote this one. let me know your thoughts.

Broken Down



When I need a shoulder to cry on
I look for you
To wipe my tears and dry them
Away for good

I’ve prayed for someone like you
To be here for me
Cause I can’t take this shit anymore
It bind’s me up

I’m broken – just broken down
I’m always a misspoken frown
Hard for me to break through
Hurting as I start to turn blue
I’m broken – just broken down
I’m always a misspoken frown
I’m broken – just broken down

When I have no one, I feel alone
As I hear howl’s
I’m like a dog trying to catch a bone
As it’s only trick

But I don’t feel like dealing with this
Anymore, or at all
It’s like my mind is in total a-bliss
With no attraction

I’m broken – just broken down
I’m always a misspoken frown
Hard for me to break through
Hurting as I start to turn blue
I’m broken – just broken down
I’m always a misspoken frown
I’m broken – just broken down

Ugh, grab me, I need full advantage
This night of mine
None of this, I can seem to manage
In my dark times

It’s like I’m in 10 feet deep in water
And I’m drowning
I don’t care, why do I even bother?
Let me go forever

I’m broken – just broken down
I’m always a misspoken frown
Hard for me to break through
Hurting as I start to turn blue
I’m broken – just broken down
I’m always a misspoken frown
I’m broken – just broken down
#2
Well, I hope you have a sense of achievement knowing you've written a poem instead of keeping to yourself!

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