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My strange poetry
#1
I dont know English good enough. Thats why i can write poems in English.
Paradox? maybe...
This verse is about Arthur Rimbaud whom you can see on my avatar.


"Pale man with the mournful eyes
Dimmed stars upon the skies
Climbing to the end of night
In the shadow of delight"
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#2
nice, I like it.
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#3
Thank you. Have you read Rimbaud?
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#4
I especially like your antitheses Smile
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#5
Nice poem valet

I just found this, i love it

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#6
Krzysztof Wrote:I especially like your antitheses Smile

)))
I try to use method of Oscar Wilde...) He had written Salome in poor French
I think i must not develop my English if i want to write poetry in English=)
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#7
I think your English is very good, though Smile. Especially if you wrote this poem using no vocabulary.
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#8
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Harlequin

You said that i'm two faced
It is not true,i'm seven faced
I have so many masks for you
You'll never see my truth

Pierrot
Serpents lay upon your lips,
The perfect nest of poisoned kiss.
You have a hateful cruel view,
I'll defend myself from you

(speaking so no one else can hear)

Silver maiden ancient goddess
Can you swallow all my sadness ?
Take me back to laughing moon.
Give me rope! I'm coming soon

Harlequin

Stay, don't go! My lovely prince
Or i'll hang myself with the rope!

(from above) -It's nice! I hope!
Valet (as D-oux)
Dedicated to Alexey
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#9
divine simplicity and delightfully entertaining... natural. I likey. Wavey
Heart  Life's too short to miss an opportunity to show your love and affection!  Heart
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#10
I'm a big fan of haiku.

The oak tree was big,
It had grown for many years,
I chopped down the tree.
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