Poetic nature test/game

[Mr. Not So Lonely]

lets find out who is just a tad poetic
here's how it works......... I start a poem with the first two lines. then each person adds a line or two (no more than two i think ) and see where it goes


The moon rose up,
In the evening sky.




you write the next line

[Synaesthete]

witnessed with awe,
for the simple things in life

[Mr. Not So Lonely]

Sun rise in the east,
over a clear blue sea

[princealbertofb]

Juggles fizzing beams of gold
Rippling on the wave crests
Fish...

[princealbertofb]

Fish short dream a slippery tale of escape

[XRIMO]

a gentle tide providing the ebb to those below the water's surface.

[princealbertofb]

Shells gape, as shoals flash by
opening pearl and sand puffs shimmering

[Mr. Not So Lonely]

beauty untold

[marshlander]

Sun dazzle, sea dapple
Blue, blood-red

[Mr. Not So Lonely]

Here lies uncle Fred,
a great big rock fell on his head