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Someone Else (Song)
#1
This song is upbeat compared to the other stuff I write.
I ended up writing it tonight to get all my feelings out on paper and it definitely helped!

I may post an audio for it sometime cause' I'm liking it.

Let me know your thoughts!


Verse 1

Dare I even try to start
Looking for where you hid my heart
I could search your kitchen counter tops
Or maybe it's under key and lock?

Just when I thought I couldn't love
That my heart could never beat enough
You squeezed your smile through the gaps
Of all the walls that I once had

Chorus

Playing a song to ease the ache
I pray my heartstrings don't break
For you, I wrote this song but I can tell
It just reminds you of someone else

Verse 2

Oh you've got the sweetest eyes
Like mint chocolate and I can't hide
My goofy grin, I get so shy
Thinking of ways to make you mine

When you're blue I'd be your palette
And we can colour you the way you like it
Under the blankets we'd be cozy and warm
But I just can't ever let you know

Chorus

Playing a song to ease the ache
I pray my heartstrings don't break
For you, I wrote this song but I can tell
It just reminds you of someone else

I'm breathing but my lungs they start to fail
Don't you know you're all I inhale
For you, I wrote this song but I can tell
It just reminds you of someone else

Bridge

And I just can't hold it in
Loving you is such a painful secret


Chorus

Playing a song to ease the ache
I pray my heartstrings don't break
For you, I wrote this song but I can tell
It just reminds you of someone else

I'm breathing but my lungs they start to fail
Don't you know you're all I inhale
For you, I wrote this song but I can tell
It just reminds you of someone else

Tag

A song for you
A song for you
A song for you
But might as well name it "Someone Else"

© Trevor de Verteuil

I know reading it the flow may seem weird, but trust me when sung it fits perfect.

Cheers!
#2
nice song, it was perfect and it presented your feelings really well.
#3
ivorybenz Wrote:nice song, it was perfect and it presented your feelings really well.

Thanks I was hoping the message was clear so that's good. Confusedmile:


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