1st) Belt dem words boo! Drop dem lyrics like dah on fyah! :p Don't worry about what people think sometimes, especially over the Youtube lol, these hoes ain't payin your rent.
If you aren't confidant, not only will we catch that, but so does your voice, which results in that shakey flutterly sound/feeling, so even if you aren't Beyonce' or Adele or even Frank Ocean, just pretend for a minute and have at it gurl!
2nd) Before you sing you should drink water to lubricate dat throat! Lube is important in other areas too you know :p. Also, in order to sing properly, you must annunciate and project your voice, ain't nobody in the third row gonna hear mouse squeaks. And I'm one to talk, cause in my first 2 I was quiet, but that's only cause I was far away and I have neighbors like right next door :/ .
Again, don't be so in your head all the time, come down and have a chat missus!
Your imperfections make you beautiful, so let them shine, cause you know a gurl wants to see some beauty <3.
Your a nice guy paul, but no tone and flat as a pancake - to add to what queenodi said, try singing more from your gut, belt it out like theres no one listning! good critism i hope.
Thanks Queen and Partisan. Good comments. I will try to be more confident. I will sing a diffrent one next time. I`m also looking for questions that i could ask in my next video. Please put your questions here please. And i shall answer them in my video. Thanks.