Iron Rose

[Meerkat54]

Nit-picking, I know, but "the following weeks will never be the same."? Are the weeks different from before they characters got into a time machine and changed them? Js...

I'm confused myself actually lol. What do you mean exactly?

If I'm interpreting you correctly, that last sentence means to foreshadow the future. The fact that "the following few weeks will never be the same again" represents that the main protagonist's normal lifestyle will no longer be normal, thanks to a series of events that carries out over those said weeks. I'm not sure how it really conflicts with anything there... I've used that term countless times in different scenarios and it works fine to whoever's reading it. :confused:

Puzzled me too.

"His boyfriend. Daniel, (..)" is the fullstop meant to be a comma?

Sorry, yeah that is supposed to be a comma. Can't change it now though :/

[Cuddly]

You can't reexperience "the following weeks". It just makes no sense, to me atleast, but I'm not a native english speaker.

What you could say, would be "the following weeks may change their lives forever" or "life will never be the same again".

[Meerkat54]

I'm still confused lol, but if it's for the best I'll change it.