Lyric ideas/concept

[rb17]

Hymn
Verse 1
Can we please just go and take a walk outside
I'm getting sick of all of these false smiles
Don't understand how they can be so deceitful
They say they love you, but they really just seem evil

They say they only do the things they do for you
But I hope and pray that you never asked them to
They all adore you and it seems reciprocated
It's all so hypocritical, and I'm beginning to hate it

Chorus
So many times I fought for you
Never made it worth my while
Used to think love would see me though
Guess I lost mine over time

And yet you say that you still love me
Truth be told I've lost my trust
I tried my hardest to believe
But, seems I've lost my faith in love

Chorus 2
So many times I fought for you
Never made it worth my while
Used to think love would see me though
Guess I lost mine over time

Don't even know if you can hear me
Still not sure you're even there
But I think this is your last chance
To give me some sign you care

Cause ever since I can remember
I had always believed in you
But ever since that September
I'm just not sure what to do

~

It's kinda like one verse and then two slightly different choruses - but I'm not sure if it's finished or not. Might be. I'm absolutely stuck for a second verse to be honest...

Just thought I'd put something up. See what people think. Any comments? Criticism?