Oh sh*t I called you Paul

[verse-a-tile]

It was a perfect night in June
The stars were dancing with the moon
The sea was humming the sweetest tune
Then I spoilt it all
When I called you Paul

Oh Peter, my sweet Peter
It was a slip of the tongue
Oh Peter, forgive me Peter
Your tears are stabbing my lung

You were nestled in my arms
Inside my love away from harm
Lust on grass of a seaside farm
Then your kisses stopped to roll
When I called you Paul

Oh Peter, my sweet Peter
It was a slip of the tongue
Oh Peter, forgive me Peter
Your tears are stabbing my lung

You know that Paul was history
A pure mistake, no mystery
I swear he's out of my memory
You are the whisper in my soul
How could I ever call you Paul?

Oh Peter, my sweet Peter
It was a slip of the tongue
Oh Peter, forgive me Peter
Your tears are stabbing my lung

[BENDERBOY]

Well done i'm gonna come back and read that when i've got a few more posts.

[azulai]

Heartbreaking.

Another great poem, verse!

[toomuch45]

this really gave me emotion a little
i couldent tell at first but when i read it a second time i really understood

job well done
i love it

[princealbertofb]

Nice work, Verse.... Another idea, another poem.... They are about mistakes, aren't they? How fallible we are! :redface:

[verse-a-tile]

thank you all