07-27-2014, 03:45 PM
Anon
From a wanna be poet, this is great. This portrays being in control, which I like. With the words spoken, you are still in control.
Our psyche is truly like a rubber band. It has long been stated that it is a very fine line between sanity and insanity. Our minds can be our greatest ally, and also our greatest enemy. It is not always within our power to pick which one it is.
Keep up the good work and share more. I would like to see other's writing as it helps with my own.
The last paragraph could use some editing, but they would be minor changes.
From a wanna be poet, this is great. This portrays being in control, which I like. With the words spoken, you are still in control.
Our psyche is truly like a rubber band. It has long been stated that it is a very fine line between sanity and insanity. Our minds can be our greatest ally, and also our greatest enemy. It is not always within our power to pick which one it is.
Keep up the good work and share more. I would like to see other's writing as it helps with my own.
The last paragraph could use some editing, but they would be minor changes.
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