MikeW Wrote:
You can't change his name and make him interesting? Like, iduno, someone with a secret identity, an undercover agent or psychopathic serial killer or something? I mean, it is *your* novel, your story, the world you've created.
Or, why not just have one of the characters you like off the main character in the first chapter?
It doesn't work that way.
Most people who write stories find that characters write themselves. No seriously when you are writing dialog and descriptions this 'secondary personality' rises up in the back of your head and takes over, and becomes 'The Voice' of the character.
This weekend I was writing in my own novel, where I wanted the protagonist and a secondary character to lay the ground work for future love. I wrote several pages, stopped, read it, felt it was forced. deleted those pages wrote again. Again it felt forced.
Then I just deleted and let the characters decide how this scene should play out. Well I got about 50 more pages and my story has taken a decidedly different turn than I wanted to force it into, but what I have is working and doesn't feel forced.
Through the years I have 'designed' characters. Which isn't wholly accurate. Characters come into being, and when you start writing about them, descriptions and trying out their voice and picturing them in your head the process takes on a life of its own.
I have had minor characters just up and decide they wanted a detailed history, to be more than just a decoration in the back ground. I have had main characters that didn't want to be heroes, or to go where I wanted them too.
Yes I know, it sounds like insanity, and I suppose it is. But many authors go into this 'reporter' mode, simply reporting what they have observed, and are not working that hard on the whole construction of the world, the characters - those things just flow out of the Void of storyland, taking on their own lives and details.
Rad, What I suggest is writing the story with this character and see where the character wants to take you. sure it may not be the place you initially intended, but this may be another story that needs to be told. Or it could be a flop.
If you have other characters, perhaps they are the real protagonist and you should let them do their thing....
Let it flow through you, don't try to force it.