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David's Poetry
#1
I'm on a sudden poetry roll, so all my poems from now on will be put in here instead of them being all over the place =]
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#2
Thank you for sharing it...
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#3
It hits you like the oh-so nearly real light at the end of the tunnel, that love is the final obstacle...

...That love is slowly slipping away from your fingers,
That love is the last thing you see before you die,
That love is the final resting place of your still heart...

...That love, simply is.
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#4
COOL

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#5
Thanks for your posts.......you have a real skill with words.
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#6
Fantastic. Love the past two new ones. Keep up the great work. We are honored to have such a wordssmith
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#7
Oh...

With every fibre of my existence I love (hate) you,
It goes with every sweep-me-off-my-feet word,
The epicentre of my love (hate) remains behind your chest...

Oh, oh...

Love (hate) is a many splendoured thing to me now,
Cross my broken heart and not sit around and wait to die,
It'll all be over soon and love (hate) shall conquer all....

Oh, oh, oh...

I am blown away by this absence of returned love (hate),
I cannot breathe but hear your name anti-climaxing on my tongue:
HE DOESN'T LOVE (HATE) YOU LIKE I LOVE (HATE) YOU.

It's okay, little child, come, let the uncontrollable sobbing carry you away...
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#8
Forgive me, there are no greater words I can say for your hunger's content,
For if you are still reading this, then I have failed to lose enough blood...

I apologise that my speech is somewhat frank, it's a matter of love and hate,
Watch this space for the latest on the contests of my head and my heart...

I will say this, this I will say, oh, get to the point, will you, we're rather busy,
Well, to your critique's siege I will say these words according to my love;

"We're just... floating, maybe even lost, but, somehow, I'm colder than you."
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#9
Dust feeds the air and disappears into the light shining through the glass,
This is the corner where I go to cry and think about things that are broken,
You're so cold that my tears have encrusted as ice upon my broken smile.

Sometimes when the darkness descends I am still there, but you are not,
I remember the love in my head only, because that's where it happened,
And the shadows are so beautiful when you're looking through a black hole.

The radiator has long since died with many things that I have broken,
The cold is unbearable, especially when your memory gives such wonderful head,
But you're not touching my skin anymore, no, no, no, not anymore...
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#10
Oh, look, isn't that wedding dress just beautiful?

Remember me? Remember us? There's a certain satisfaction...?
All the times when we shared our suicide attempts, and prayers...
Oh, but look at you now, you're all grown up, you're in love.

I don't actually have a friend that I can tell anything, except you,
Oh God, look at all these tears on the keyboard, can you see them?
Everyone's something different and I am still as wretched as stillborn.

We are both fighting the same losing battle, except, you're sort of won,
No more cages of pathological sinning for you, God loves you so much,
But you're drifting, I'm crying, I'm crying, I'm sorry, oh God, I'm so sorry...
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