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David's Poetry
#11
From my perspective everyone turns in their broken mirror surfaces,
But from the outside it's me and my never-ending pathological lie...

From my side of things it seems that I am the perfect imperfection,
But you all see how I am not actually the victim in this situation...

From where I am, there is no judgement, except in a higher power's favour,
But they all know that in my eyes, I am only a judgement myself...
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#12
"Put it down! Put your hands behind your head... Back slowly away from the broken heart."

Don't make me disppear into my notebooks again,
You finally have deluded both him and me into love,
Or at least me, who's to say what's right or real...

What do you mean, forever? By that you mean... ?

I have forgotten where I am and where I came from,
This is a cage, and I'm watching it falling, falling down,
On top of me, you're no longer on top of me, no...

What do you mean, forever? By that you mean... ?

This is a questionable lie indeed, a dream within a dream,
This is when you move in for the kill and profuse deceit,
Into the web of past-loves, here's your standing ovation...

What do you mean, forever? By that you mean... ?

"I can explain! Really, it's not what it looks like... I did try to warn him, to save him."
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#13
TO REMIND EVERYONE OF THE GENIUS OF OUR BDAY BOY

for style I totally love Unrequited Hatred

and how did you get into my diary for Broken Radiator ???

Hope you had a great birthday and maybe give us a happy piece of your mind Wavey
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#14
I am amazed at your super ability to express you inner feelings so beautifully. Pleas never quit you are very talented.
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#15
thank you!! ^O^ dont worry ill post more soon, havent been online in yonks o_O Tongue3
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#16
Humbly do you remind me of playing with knives and emotion,
The day that diamonds rained in the shape of my entire life,
I have locked myself in the ventricle chambers of my heart.

You'll find that you're actually bleeding when you remember me,
No more nostalgia for the keys that I have thrown away, or lost,
No, lost, I can't willingly forget the fact that I'm still in lust with you.

They keep keeping fickle promises and decide to (No, sorry, too personal...),
No more "I love you's" she mourns into the speakers, and I'm listening darling,
The day has come for me to shed these tears instead, and actually love you.

"...My room is a fucking mess.
My life is a fucking mess."
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#17
You spent all your time waiting for me to love you,
You spent all your happiness at my truth's expense,
You spent the fact that your love has passed you by...

You should stop with all these theatrics that I have created,
You should really should stop with all this "forever" business,
You should forget my neverending lie and pretend I'm alright...

I have to fall in love with you according to your logic,
I have to fall for my own pretense to do just that,
I realise you couldn't be any more beautiful than him...
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#18
None of us were angels, you're just a freak,
You are the abomination that is happiness,
Can't let that sort of thing survive for long...

Until you kill yourself and your resources,
Such kindness as war will never, ever end,
A life for some oil will numb our guilt, for now....
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#19
Absolutely love the poetry esp broken radiator. Alas so long since I have put pen to paper in such a way. Hopefully you will see some of my stuff on here soon. Keep posting youre poems.
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#20
Fading away into the din of the outside world,
Can your breathing be any softer on my neck?
This kiss is choking me, this is true love...

I'll take this secret to the grave with me and you,
The secret of this "virginity" of mine, and, my heart?
Your touch is enstilling me, this is true lust...

It won't be long now until my lips can part again,
For now though, who does my resolve remain with?
Your memory is killing me piece by piece, this... you.
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