Sylphs' Shorts <3

[thawoods]

I think Portuguese is a lot more milder than Spanish, if u notice, they are very similar, but Portugal is a country located just at the west of the Spanish border, you can tell that some petty differences about lexicography and phonology split these two countries (lol), they used to be one kingdom circa 1000-1399 after the Christian rulers of Europe reconquested Iberia from the Moorish invaders. x

[Meerkat54]

Holy crap! I got some catch-up reading to do hahaha, but from reading the first couple I can also say you have some talent. Very interesting pieces, interesting/unique topics and the way you word them. I've never read poetry in another language but it seems to work in its own way. Keep it up! :3

And I'm glad I inspired you to post your own stuff too I'll try and keep posting my own stuff every few days.

[thawoods]

...sorry Sylph, didn't notice your quote, i still can't understand Portuguese and most Latin-derived languages but I am willing to learn.

...and I am delighted by your proficiency in Portuguese (that's all I can understand, lol).

[thawoods]

Do you know French by any chance Sylph?

[Insertnamehere]

Thanks boo . But far be it from me to claim to Speak Spanish. I mean yes I do, but not in the sense of how you interpreted it, i.e - no not natively/grammatically accurate.

I said as much already, tho this for me, is just a way to practice and exercise what vocabulary and syntax I have retained, and if later on I notice errors or if you or another native speaker graciously picks out errors, then I can make a mental note of where and how I made those errors and fix them.

Tho bitch, that Spanish "Por vs Para" conundrum, will forever be my bane, I swear x.x

The problem could possibly stem from the way I've learned to use them in Portuguese, which is different at times.


However, keep them error checks coming hun! You know I love when you correct me, cause it helps me learn


One of these damn days tho, I'll impress ya with some grammatically perfect Spanish

You're not there yet, but you've come a long way from zero, so that's an accomplishment.

Haha, you don't have to be perfect, not even native speakers are, but do take these small errors that change the entire meaning of the phrase into consideration.

[Sylph]

I think Portuguese is a lot more milder than Spanish, if u notice, they are very similar, but Portugal is a country located just at the west of the Spanish border, you can tell that some petty differences about lexicography and phonology split these two countries (lol), they used to be one kingdom circa 1000-1399 after the Christian rulers of Europe reconquested Iberia from the Moorish invaders. x

Yes ma'am! You're quite well informed :v
Tho I find Portuguese more "Rustic" in a sense and a bit more flexible, but Spanish is like the more "emotive" sister

Holy crap! I got some catch-up reading to do hahaha, but from reading the first couple I can also say you have some talent. Very interesting pieces, interesting/unique topics and the way you word them. I've never read poetry in another language but it seems to work in its own way. Keep it up! :3

And I'm glad I inspired you to post your own stuff too I'll try and keep posting my own stuff every few days.

Yes gurl! Keep it up
Poetry in a foreign language carries a different weight I find, because the meanings and gravity of whats being conveyed is not the same as in English or with one another :c

...sorry Sylph, didn't notice your quote, i still can't understand Portuguese and most Latin-derived languages but I am willing to learn.

...and I am delighted by your proficiency in Portuguese (that's all I can understand, lol).

Oh its fine dear! I was just showing off a lil .
I can teach ya lil things here and there, but I'm not as educated in it as a fully Native speaker :0

Do you know French by any chance Sylph?

Sadly, I dont but I did take it as a course in High school. For 4 years at GCSE level, but when I graduated, I stopped using it x.x

You're not there yet, but you've come a long way from zero, so that's an accomplishment.

Haha, you don't have to be perfect, not even native speakers are, but do take these small errors that change the entire meaning of the phrase into consideration.

Yes Hun, tho I shall still aim for perfection :v

I wanna tell my Marzy that he made a mistake LoL

I'm gonna stalk ya today or tomorrow on the phooooooone :0 kidding~

[Insertnamehere]

Yes ma'am! You're quite well informed :v

Hmm, Arabs weren't kicked out until 1492. The entire process of reconquista lasted centuries, starting with the very small kingdoms in the Spanish March of the Carolingian Empire. There were a bunch of those, each with their own latin-derived dialect.

More than Spanish and Portuguese diverging, what happened was an initial fragmentation of Iberian dialects, most of which were standarized under the Castilian dialect to form modern Spanish, which coincided of course with the unification of most of these small Christian kingdoms under the Catholic Monarchs, to form modern day Spain, leaving Portugal (and by extension Portuguese) as independent entities (except for a few ocassions).

[Sylph]

あなたの他意
[Your Malice]



やはり。。。

あなたの心は信しません
とあなたの声は、話しません。

私たちの神様にあなたは落とすしました、
しかし、助けるありませんまだまだだ。

罪しました、
幻術しました、

神様はあなたが思う敏腕ないですか。。。

あなたは悪魔ですね

化け物

でも、これはあなたの物でしょ。。。

やはり 、
これはあなたの内他意です。

Spoiler:

As I thought...

Your Heart does not Trust,
and your Voice, does not Speak.

You let our God Fall[*Left God's Side]
However, it still does not help.

It was a Sin
Was an Illusion,

You think God is not Competent?...

You're a Demon

A Monster.

But this is probably your "Thing"...

Like I thought,
This is your Inner Malice

* I wrote this actually out on Paper first, as a form of outlet for some frustrations I been feeling lately and just kinda got creative with it x.x

[Sylph]

世界の救済者
「The World's Saviour」



[SIZE="4"]今は、時だ

私は終わりの世界にだ。まっています。。。
今だ、死の時間は
そして、あなたの救済者は招待を送信でした

でも

あなたの心は死んだ。

「ゆらゆら、ゆらゆら」

”私は本当に生きません？”

「もちろん！あなたは死んと無駄だ！」声言います。

怖がって、あなた尋ねるあなたの救済者

「オ-お願いします、助けて！」

けど、彼は。。。ここじゃない[/SIZE]

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English -v

Spoiler:

Now, It's Time.

I'm at the End of the World. Waiting...
It's Now, The Time of Death
And, your Saviour was sending you an Invitation

But

Your Heart's Dead.

[ Wobbling, Swaying]

"Am I really not Alive?"

[ Of course! You're Dead and Useless! ] A voice says

Scared, You ask your Saviour;

[ p-Please, Help me! ]

However, He... is not Here.

This one was a not so happy ending one, as opposed to all the other light hearted ones I normally write :0

More of a morose short story if you will

[Sylph]

[SIZE="4"]

[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]蝶の翼を
雀蜂のバズを[/COLOR]
”はじめの乖離”

[/SIZE]

[SIZE="4"][COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Wings of The Butterfly
Buzz of The Wasp[/COLOR]
"Beginning of The Divergence"[/SIZE]

Dedicated to my Grumpy Gus [MENTION=23097]Insertnamehere[/MENTION]

[SIZE="4"]あの日。。。

あの時間に。。。

すべてはの世界で隠しｔました
鳥いません、犬いません。[/SIZE]

「みんなでどこだ？？」あなたは言う

[SIZE="4"]ここは。。。

「死神の区をに」声が言う

なぜか？

「お前は天国に行きませんねもう一度声言
お前は雀蜂をみたいだ！お前は蝶をしよ痛い、きっと。
だっから、私たちはこの世界で平和を要るよ。」[/SIZE]

Spoiler:

That Day...

At that Time...

Everything in the World was Concealed
No Birds, No Dogs.

[Where's Everyone??You say,

Where am I?

[In the Ward of The Grim Reaper] A Voice Says,

Why?

[Ya not going to Heaven ya know]The Voice once again Speaking.
[COLOR="magenta"]Ya like a Wasp! You're harmful to the Butterfly, without a doubt
And so therefore, We need peace in this World.][/COLOR]