I am

[Rychard the Lionheart]

Another for you.

Hope it does not offend anybody.

I am confused, with my life
try as hard to conform
can not be normal

I am in love, with a man
my heart desires him
can not be straight

I am living, with a dream
my soul needs him
can not be true

I am sad, with a worry
will this love last
can not be sure

[YoungPup]

I find this poem to be very sad. It seems like you are bearing your soul. You don't know what to do, you want to live up to the commercial standards of "normal". You yearn for this man and it seems not just physically, but 100% need/love him. You want it to last but you understand that you won't ever know for sure. Very well written. This is the kind of poetry I love to read. Great Job
~Puppy

[Rychard the Lionheart]

Thanks youngPup.

Poetry can be very emotional, especially when its personal.

[fjp999]

[COLOR="Purple"]Why "offend"?
Beautiful, heartfelt thoughts expressed so well should never offend [/COLOR]

[gaygay33]

i think it's a nice poem too