Poetic nature test/game

[Synaesthete]

a lonely bed, a rippling grave,
and yet the world is his oyster

[Dark Angel]

He sits and stares
within his cave
and cannot help but wonder..

(sorry I done three =[

[Mr. Not So Lonely]

Was that the sound of his breaking heart,
Or a clap of thunder

[Synaesthete]

Or was it simply the reverberation of the long forgotten occurence that dragged him under

[Sil]

and what dread times did he unfold,
the lapping of a long lost soul

[princealbertofb]

In the evening sky.
witnessed with awe,
for the simple things in life
Sun rise in the east,
over a clear blue sea
Juggles fizzing beams of gold
Rippling on the wave crests
Fish...
Fish short dream a slippery tale of escape
a gentle tide providing the ebb
to those below the water's surface.
Shells gape, as shoals flash by
opening pearl and sand puffs shimmering
beauty untold
Sun dazzle, sea dapple
Blue, blood-red
Here lies uncle Fred,
a great big rock fell on his head
a lonely bed, a rippling grave,
and yet the world is his oyster
He sits and stares
within his cave
and cannot help but wonder..
Was that the sound of his breaking heart,
Or a clap of thunder?
Or was it simply the reverberation
of the long forgotten occurence
that dragged him under?
and what dread times did he unfold,
the lapping of a long lost soul
Shoals of fish pass him by
morsels of cracked skull still decry

[Mr. Not So Lonely]

he was here i was not
OMG I feel like snot

[princealbertofb]

probably not your best endeavour
shouldn't poetry show more fervour?

[Lilmy87]

But I couldn't see it,
I'd damaged my eye.

[marshlander]

Half-hidden, spring coiled
Within a weed-waving lair