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Paradise Part One
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[COLOR="Magenta"]hey, this is an excellent piece of poetry
imagery, metaphors and superb vocabulary
i particulary enjoyed the erotic bits
[/COLOR] :tongue:

"We batter our engorged cocks into our bellies,
sliding, rubbing and humping them in orgiastic delight"
"our smoldering hot love rods touch"
"the velvet soft flesh of one hot quivering cock
touches and rubs and lies against a similar rampant cock"
"he touches my super sensitive dick, grappling it in his hand"
"I want him in me…I need his love tool in me"
"to have my love tunnel filled with his supreme gift,
to eventually feel his hot sperm spurt deep within me"
"that our sexual coupling is the zenith of our passions"
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Paradise Part One - by jjsouth - 10-25-2010, 01:51 PM
Paradise Part One - by princealbertofb - 10-25-2010, 06:26 PM
Paradise Part One - by verse-a-tile - 01-22-2011, 09:36 AM

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