I don't remember it that well

[verse-a-tile]

Your name was Jacob or Jerome
We met in Paris or in Rome
At someone's party or a bar
Your face, or arm, revealed a scar
I don’t remember it that well
But I recall your sexy smell

I either smiled or winked at you
Your eyes were hazel, maybe blue
Looked twenty, no, thirty years old
With longish hair, or were you bold?
I don’t remember it that well
But I recall your sexy smell

You came from Cyprus or from Spain
The night was clear, or did it rain?
Full moon, oh no, a moonless sky
You laughed aloud or let a sigh
I don’t remember it that well
But I recall your sexy smell

We went for a walk, or did we dine?
Then ended up at yours or mine
We made love twice, thrice I believe
You stayed all night or did you leave?
I don’t remember it that well
But I recall your sexy smell

[toomuch45]

ooh i like when you put
we did it twice, thrice i believe
that was a killer line

[Kiri]

Great poem! :biggrin:

[Cain]

At someone’s party or a bar
Your face, or arm, revealed a scar

i liked this lines alot.

and i want to ask that
one time=once
two times=twice
three times= thrice
four times= ????
and i ve seen thrice very rarely (and if you think that i must be hanged because i speak like an emotimal terminator under this thread. Pls think again because i am not into bondage thing. :tongue: ) hasta la vista baby.

[azulai]

verse: I really look forward to each every one of your poems! :biggrin:
This one is great!

[verse-a-tile]

toomuch
kiri
cain
azulai

thanks a lot

[princealbertofb]

Yes I liked your poem too... Your poor memory needs to be jogged....
lol. It's sad, in a way, that you can't remember his name of anything specific about him.... except that you made love three times.
Incidentally, there's a song (I believe in Gigi), that reminds me of this poem .... but maybe it's not in Gigi although Maurice Chevalier springs to mind.

yes, my memory isn't too bad... were you inspired by this, Verse-a-tile?

[princealbertofb]

Maybe you had a little too much champagne that day? mile:

[verse-a-tile]

prince albert, thanks

[KnightShade]

That poem made me think of that song from "Gigi" too!

Oh yes, I remember it well.